Below is the feedback from the abstract assignment:
Curious what the differences in brain processes might be. As you move forward with this topic, I suggest thinking mainly about two things:
1. Is the scope manageable for a short paper of just roughly 5 pages? Do you have adequate page space to explore BOTH print and e-reading? It may be more manageable to either focus just on one OR focus on one specific aspect of both. I suspect an entire book could be written on this general topic.
2. What new knowledge will your paper produce? What will your paper offer to the current scholarly discourse on this topic that’s not already covered in the sources you’ve chosen? Remember that your paper should not merely report previous literature and repeat the ideas of others. I will want to see some critical analysis in the discussion section of the final paper.
