Does the introduction draw the reader in to the topic? Is it clear how this topic connects to water sustainability issues and is relevant to Hawai’i and the Pacific?
For standard format papers, start with global feedback: is this draft meeting the assignment requirements for the standard format problem solution research essay? What specific parts or sentences did you like the most or find the most interesting or well-written? Does the introduction draw the reader in to the topic? Is it clear how this […]