Personal Statement
Write an extremely compelling statement about what it means to be in the United
States Navy and how important and grateful you are that you have an opportunity to
serve.
Discuss and explain in a compelling manner how with having the proper mentorship and
tools, that there is no limit as to what can be accomplished in a career in the United
States Navy.
Discuss how if the opportunity to not serve your country wasn’t an option anymore how
devastating and destructive it would be to your life. Explain how you would love to
accomplish so much more such as becoming a Commissioned Officer or a Chief in the
United States Navy. Explain how you would love the opportunity to be a leader and
make change in the military.
Discuss how extremely proud you are to serve your country, the United States of
America.
Discuss that you want to continue to make your family proud by being a great sailor in
the navy.
Explain why everyone deserves a second chance. Thoroughly explain why you deserve
to be in the Navy (grab the reader’s attention and give reasons that are so believable
to connect with the audience).
Give compelling reasons why you want to stay in the United States Navy. Use
imagination with the reasons but make they extremely compelling and convincing.
