Relationship Matters: The key to college success
The article is about why community college students drop out of college and how we can help them stay enrolled using personal examples, stories, and/or quotes from “classrooms as communities” by Tinto and “why we quit” by Raley.
Problem/solution article: Why community college drop out? My answer is because of lack social integration especially with first-year college students.
Solution: Community college resources and/or virtual students activities etc.
Can you begin the article with statistics about college dropout —then tell a story about one having social issues which discourage them to continue. And then provide solutions about what one can do to stay in college only to bring it to a nice conclusion that ties everything together and please be sure the article flows instead of randomly saying whatever because I noticed that the paper I paid for before someone was paraphrasing some articles on the internet and there was a lot of misplaced information. So, now I have to re-do it again because I spotted similarities between the paper I received and the article online and my paper will be due in a few days. Please, I don’t have time to research and complete everything as I am very busy and I shell out money for the “top writer” so I don’t need someone just changing the words on the articles online. Thank you for your time and understanding.
