General comment: Dear writer, you haven’t followed the requirements listed previously by QA:
“1. You have to meet the learning outcomes:
a. Evaluate your knowledge, skills and attributes to identify personal and professional development needs.
b. Appraise the role and responsibilities of the registered practitioner in managing them self and others.
c. Discuss the legal, ethical and professional requirements of professional registration.
2. “You cover professionalism well although it is rather an overview of the professionalism of any Registered professional rather than ODP’s and there’s very little content for legal, ethical and managing self and others” — not addressed. Please, be more critical and add the required information.
3. Please, add more analysis in the main body of the essay as it’s required.”