Thomas Hobbes and John Locke have a lot in common. Both discuss life and the way in which people should behave.
Why is your research relevant? Why have you decided to compare both thinkers?. Avoid using ”I” in the beginning of each paragraph – this is not about what you believe but on how you interpret their texts. Your conclusion is not very clear since your last paragraph is also a comparison. Add a conclusion. Overall is good.
