Your intro paragraph should be three things you observed. An intro sentence followed by one sentence on each observation followed by a connecting sentence to the next paragraph and you have a good start.
Analysis of each observation should take the form of a paragraph on each observation. This is the hard part. What are the implications of the observation? Why is this important? What would you do based on the observation if you were in charge?
Do other sources collaborate that observation and thus there are news stories on that observation? Are your thoughts about security as you start the class confirmed or denied? What does that mean if this is representative of trend data? This requires critical thinking and exploratory learning.
